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Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
7/10.
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Re: What if...
I'd, um, I'd die I guess. Nah, just kidding. I'd be saved by Superman. What if I had never joined this site? :P
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Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for having a disturbing picture of Steven Tyler as your avatar.
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Re: You Know You're a Nerd When...
Warrior Princess wrote: When you're the only girl on the math team.... You cut me deep there, Knightley.
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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but he turns out to be a royal douche. (Did I even spell that right?) I wish I were prettier. :P
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Re: First Poem
Ah, it's you who wrote my favorite scary story EVVA!!!! :P Well, welcome to the weird, wild, and wonderful world of poetry. A frightening place, to be sure, but take ...
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Re: Paradise Found
This is a very pretty poem; good imagery. A few nitpicks: If the world weren't so vast, and my house not as clean I would've been here on another morning, ...
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Re: Lunatic
Hi, and welcome to YWS! I'm Warior Princess and I will be reviewing your debut poem today. My thoughts and my love drive me differently than you. I like how ...
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Re: Suicidal Moon
There's not much I can say here that hasn't been said by others....the whole emo theme (especially the cutting) was well presented, but one sees it so often on this ...
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Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror
I like this poem, and don't see why everyone else is being so hard on it. Sure, the whole mirror subject is a tad overused, but it is my opinion ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
7/10. Nice internal rhyme, but made my jaw hurt. . . .
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
10/10. Funny as heck! :P
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Re: Goodbye Mom
Well dear, you know I am a fairly lazy reviewer and see everything through rose-colored glasses, so you musn't expect a very helpful review out of me. I have to ...
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Re: I was the Hero: Entry #1
I don't know if I'd class this as a short story, as there isn't much plot or character development. However, the piece itself is well written and interesting. I have ...
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Re: A Prayer for a Pitcher
I really liked this piece. It started out looking like a random apostrophe to a beverage container, then became a pretty profound meditation on life and existence. You also maintained ...
Nov 28, 2010
